Monday, December 13, 2010

Lady (extended)

The "extended" version. Twelve verses, twenty-six lines.

Fair Lady far from her homeland,
your life is forever western bound,
and you caught between two worlds.

Fickle Lady filled with uncertainties,
today’s truth is sure to be tomorrow’s lie.

Sweet Lady of compassionate heart,
your thoughts always empathizing.

Spiteful Lady of the warrior caste,
the enemy in name is not always so.

Gentle Lady from the river faith,
cleanse and heal the sinner’s soul.

Combative Lady of the demon-fighting blood,
you thrill to battle despite your denials.

Thoughtful Lady full of fancies,
taking your beautiful dreams to their end.

Selfish Lady full of herself,
destroying the future for a present whim.

Loving Lady born of the sun’s followers,
in your affection is the fruit of life.

Passionate Lady with the bewitching eyes,
an exciting tempest in the heat of your touch.

Laughing Lady with your vivacious soul,
your joy of living filling those around you.

Lady who means Wealth, Beheld by God,
be free of the dark and shine your light,
since heart speaks to heart, listen.


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Lady

The "core" version. Six verses, thirteen lines.

Sweet Lady of compassionate heart,
your thoughts always empathizing.

Spiteful Lady of the warrior caste,
the enemy in name is not always so.

Combative Lady of the demon-fighting blood,
you thrill to battle despite your denials.

Thoughtful Lady full of fancies,
taking your beautiful dreams to their end.

Passionate Lady with the bewitching eyes,
an exciting tempest in the heat of your touch.

Lady who means Wealth, Beheld by God,
be free of the dark and shine your light,
since heart speaks to heart, listen.

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Wednesday, December 1, 2010

Over the Hills

Found a very old poem of mine, thought to post it here.

Over the Hills
Over the hills and far away,
I march to meet my end.
The arena of battle is my destination,
to the field of death I am sent.
I have no one waiting for me at home,
I have no one who loves me worrying.
Since there is nothing for me in this world,
I have nothing to live on for.
In this battle to which I march,
I will care not for Old Grim's smile.
Over the hills and far away,
I embrace my bitter destiny.

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Thursday, November 18, 2010

89

Tears come unbidden
The Grief never lets me go
The Knight of Mourning

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Monday, November 1, 2010

88

Even the devil knows when he meets divinity
Only a fool fails to recognize a goddess
So what am I not to see holiness
Or at least a sacred person right beside me?

Guess this is what they mean
When they say too dumb too live
So since hell is too good for me
I better dread the payment for my sin

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Monday, October 4, 2010

Return, Part 5

It did not take long for an end to the battle once the horsemen were committed. Once again, fortune had smiled on Ardeo, allowed him to commit his troopers at just the moment when the enemy’s morale was at its lowest. With Marcus’s own horsemen plunging in from the opposite end, the enemy collapsed, attempted to flee. The piercing cohort took its cue from the fleeing enemy, chasing after it. In a conspicuous display of military skill and courage, they managed to enter Taren’s city gate, and seize possession of it. Ardeo and Marcus had moved as quickly as they could to follow the cohort in, and very soon, the rest of the army was pouring into the tightly contested gate. Before the Tarens could stop them, two legions had already broken into the city, with a third on its way.

Aware they had lost, every last surviving fighting man had fled from the field, shedding their armor and weapons on the spot. With great difficulty, Ardeo and Marcus managed to restrain their pillage-hungry soldiers, threatening immediate execution to anyone who disobeyed. By sunset, there was no more resistance, and Odacer himself entered the city, escorted by Karadord and his Guardsmen. Ardeo and Marcus met him at the entrance to Flaccus’s palace.

“What took you?” Ardeo called out lightheartedly.

Odacer leveled an amused look at his kinsman. “Mopping up is not an elegant operation, Ardeo. You, Marcus, and the commander of the cohort certainly distinguished yourselves today, but there is more to battle than the thrill of the charge.”

Ardeo smiled, still covered in sweat and dirt, his cloak and armor in not much better state. “That’s why we’re waiting here. We wanted you to enter first, do the whole formal acceptance of surrender thing.”

Tilting his head back, Karadord frowned. “Flaccus is surrendering?”

“Yes,” Marcus answered. “I sent my cavalry to secure the docks. No ships have sailed. And all the gates have been sealed. No one has left the city.”

“That is…not in character,” Odacer finally said. “Andrej Palev, I hope you won’t mind lending me your Guardsmen while we go inside.”

Karadord shook his head. “No, I do not mind at all.”

Warily entering Flaccus’s palace, the heavily armed troop moved carefully, watchful for the slightest sign of betrayal, the noblemen in their center no less wary. The obvious displays of wealth and splendor were lost on all present, as Ardeo and his kin were indifferent to such things, while the Imperials were inured to it, already accustomed to the far greater displays in the Emperor’s capital.

When they finally entered Flaccus’s audience chamber, the noblemen stopped, in shock. Flaccus, unmistakable with his fair features and fine clothes, was chained to his throne. Heavy iron links kept him bound, unable to move, while a gag had been stuffed into his mouth. Standing beside him was a woman wearing a dress of Imperial scarlet, a tall, elegant lady with hair the color of fire, skin as fine as alabaster, and eyes that contained more than a hint of the ocean’s sea blue. Her physical beauty combined with the fierce intelligence in her eyes made for an intoxicating combination.

“My name is Valena Orguja Theron, Princess of the Imperial House,” she said in the precise accent of the Imperial city, facing her…guests? It was impossible to imagine this woman as anyone’s prisoner.

She studied each man in turn, her sangfroid easily surpassing that of her brother’s. Her eyes dismissed Marcus and Ardeo, settling on Odacer with complete assurance. “I take it that this was my brother’s doing?”

The older man inclined his head gracefully. “It is indeed, Princess Valena. However, I do believe that Andrej Palev is in a better position to explain everything.”

With smoothly polished grace, Karadord explained everything to Valena from the very beginning, starting with Ardeo’s victory over the Fianna on Firesoul’s Plain. From the moment Karadord had indicated Ardeo’s person, Valena had focused her attention on him, and her gaze made Ardeo uncomfortable, to say the least. He had once heard his father mutter that when a woman looked at you like that, she was weighing every last thing about your person, and it was quite possible she was able to divine everything from his exact weight to the last time he had had his underclothing washed.

“Enough,” Valena said when Karadord began to elaborate on the discussions that had gone on in the Imperial court as to why Flaccus had rebelled.

She moved gracefully down the dais where Flaccus still sat in chains, impotent. “Would you like to know why this man rebelled?”

“I daresay it is of great interest, Princess Valena,” Karadord responded smoothly.

“Yes, you would certainly think so, Karadord,” Valena replied. “This…man, and I use the term loosely, was never the slightest bit interested in loyalty to the Empire. What he wanted was to bring back his precious Respublia in his own image. My divorce was just a pretext he needed to give his cause some legitimacy.”

Her bitter half-smile caused chills up Ardeo’s back. “After all, how can you genuinely rebel against your rightful overlord when your wife is still a virgin?”

Odacer, at least, was startled. “You remain a virgin? But why…?”

Valena’s half-smile faded away, and her tone of voice left no doubt as to how direly unhappy her life had been for the last few years. “That thing in his throne has no interest in women. His preference is for little boys.”

Ardeo saw Odacer, Marcus, and Karadord each reflect the horror and disgust that he himself felt. His hand itched to remove his sword and behead Flaccus on the spot. But he did not get the chance to beg Karadord and Odacer for the task, as Valena marched toward him, stopping right in front of him.

“And now I find I am to marry someone else,” she said, her voice detached, cold, disinterested. “Once again, I am being used by a male of my family as a tool for some sordid task. Why in the world should I look forward to exile in cold Iyaza? Why in the world should I marry you? I’m officially divorced from that…pervert. I’m free. Why should I give up my freedom?”

Valena looked away from Ardeo to glare at Odacer and Karadord before they could so much as open their mouths. “And don’t give me that duty rubbish. I’ve had a bellyful of duty. Duty sent me away from my beautiful home to this far-off place, and put me into the hands of a disgusting creature. Duty forced me to remain silent, since Father could do nothing to save me without risk of rebellion. Duty forced me to ignore things that even now make me want to vomit. Not one word of duty!”

As this fierce woman swung her eyes away from the older, ostensibly wiser statesmen to him, Ardeo felt himself at a loss of words. He had originally dreaded this encounter, had been as enthusiastic about his coming marriage as he would have been about a dragon eating his horse. But now that he had actually met her, he was confused, uncertain. She was unlike any woman, especially any noblewoman, he had ever met before.

She was certainly beautiful, easily one of the greatest beauties of the Empire. She was intelligent, tough, and resourceful; witness her survival in the court of a husband who had no use for her, and her capture of an enemy of Imperial Sandora. Her bloodline was the best in the world, and her dowry was more than most nobles made in a decade. She was eligible in every sense of the world. She was as tough as a Fianna, as beautiful as a goddess, and as brave as a dragon. Ardeo was smitten.

But there was more to it than that. Ardeo could sense it. She was not an empty-headed noblewoman; the prime occupations of her life were not clothes, jewels, and gossip. She was an intelligent woman who had been damned by her father into an unhappy marriage, and who had probably suffered as much from being stifled as she had from being neglected. She wanted to be free. That was impossible, of course. No one was ever free. Freedom was an unattainable lie that people kept reaching for. But he could at least offer her the lightest of shackles.

Ardeo got down on one knee before her. “I swear to you, Princess Valena, that if you marry me, I will not treat you as chattel. I will not neglect you, nor will I shove you into some corner to do nothing more than produce babies. I will treat you as your intelligence demands it. I will treat you as my equal, and share my power and authority over Iyaza with you. P’iedro’s Oath on it.”

Silence reigned throughout the audience chamber. P’iedro’s Oath was the most ironclad oath anyone could swear. Even the Emperor himself was bound by such an oath, and should he dare break it, the War of the Sin would seem like a mere inconvenience compared to the consequences, both in this world and the next. Not only had he sworn the oath, he had done so on his knee, something that he would only have to do before the Emperor himself. For long moments, Valena studied him, her expression inscrutable.

Finally, when even Ardeo was forced to conclude that she was going to reject him, she extended her hand toward him. Ardeo felt hope soar within him as he grasped her clean, dainty hand in his dirty steel gauntlet. She smiled at him, the first time her expression lacked hostility. “I think I like you, Ardeo Vellus. I think I may grow to love you. So I will marry you, if you are willing.”

Ardeo smiled triumphantly. Besides all the benefits this marriage would bring politically, he did like her, and he thought she was right. There were seeds here for friendship, and perhaps, even love. “I would be happy to.”

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Return, Part 4

Halfway through the night, Ardeo was awakened by an excited commotion outside his tent. Grumbling, he tried to curl under his blankets. It was night, he was tired, and his hastily assembled bodyguard should be more than capable of keeping any unwanted visitors away from his tent. However, the noise became more insistent, and his sleeping momentum was lost. With a growl, Ardeo shucked off his blankets, and stalked out of his tent.

“What is the meaning of this?” he demanded.

The man who had been attempting to get in looked at Ardeo, and from his facial features and skin, it was obvious he was an Aimani. “Duke Nyzdar. Archduke Mircea summons you to a war council.”

“A war council? In the middle of the night?”

“The city gates have opened. Thousands of fighters are pouring out and taking up positions in the no man’s land.”

“Shit!”

With that bit of unexpected news, Ardeo roared for the soldiers to be roused and for his servants. Drums drummed, horns blared, lower-ranked soldiers rushed to officer tents to awaken their superiors, and soon, joined the cacophony of noise with curses that would awaken the dead.

His servants appeared as soon as he reentered his tent. Moving quickly, they helped him into his armor, making sure everything was securely fastened, from cuirass to greaves. Grabbing his red cloak, he rushed toward Odacer’s tent, securely in the middle of the siege camp. His bodyguard hustled after him even as the noise of six legions in frenzied activity clamored through the night.

When Ardeo finally arrived at Odacer’s tent, he found he was not the only man there. All the senior officers of the army were gathered around Odacer, as were the young noblemen like Marcus who would take on some sort of role in the upcoming fight.
“It’s still too dark to see how they’ve drawn themselves up or to see their numbers,” Odacer growled as soon as Ardeo arrived.

Karadord was speaking with Odacer and shrugged. “You’re the legendary Dragon, so I daresay it will go well, even if we can’t see them just yet.”

“We’ll have to wait for the first crack of dawn to actually make feasible plans,” Odacer continued. “In the meantime, hustle out the legions, standard formation. When I can see the enemy, I’ll make a better plan.”

“But how did they know that today would be the day of the attack?” Ardeo asked. “I know their chances are better in pitched battle, but how did they know today was the day?”

Odacer looked at Ardeo and said one word. “Kuso.”

Of course. Where else could the assassin have gone, if not to Taren? “They don’t make Fianna like they used to,” was all Ardeo replied.

When dawn finally arrived two hours later, Odacer’s army was out on the field, past the deadly row of stakes he had elected to remove. He had no intention of losing the battle, nor did he intend to retreat, but if his army was pushed back, he wanted to avoid impaled soldiers. It would be a fight to the death. The siege camp’s walls cut off retreat. When Odacer finally climbed down from his sentry tower, his face was expectant.

“From what’s been counted, they’ve got about forty to fifty thousand out there,” Odacer said to his gathered command chain. “The army’s already out on the field, so I can’t address them. Everything is now dependent on you men, and your obedience and adaptability. We’ve got about eighteen thousand soldiers out there, with fourteen hundred of them cavalry. We don’t have nearly enough cavalry to focus on the wings, so they’ll act as the mobile reserve. The Guardsmen will be on the left, my cohort of horse in the center, and Duke Nyzdar’s on the right. Andrej Palev will command the left, Duke Nyzdar the right, and I will command the center.”

Having settled the top jobs, Odacer moved on to his strategy. “The city gate is in the center of our field of operations. I want you all to use it as the orientation point. I want the army drawn up in a sickle shape. The legions on the tips will be forward of the center, acting as wings. I am placing a cohort in the center of the sickle as a piercing point. I want the wings even with the spike. The goal is simple. I want to split their army in two, and enclose each half within the half-sickles that will form. Once they’ve been split, we’ll punish them severely.”

The various officers murmured their understanding of the plan. Karadord spoke up. “Workable. I’ll go form up my men.”

Odacer nodded. “Remember, they only have fifteen thousand real fighters out there. The rest is little boys and old men. Spread the word to your legions. They’ll discount the civilians and realize that for all intents and purposes, the odds are slightly in our favor.”

No time was wasted. The moment the army had been put into formation, Odacer sounded the advance. Odacer himself would not be able to participate. As general, he had to keep a good vantage point so he could react appropriately to any changes in the line of battle. Marcus was in command of the six hundred cavalry who would be moved to any weakened points. Ardeo and Karadord would be with their own cavalry, keeping an eye on their parts of the army from their own vantage points, and reacting appropriately.

Later on, as the battle progressed, Ardeo stood on his horse, frowning at what he could see of the scene. He turned toward a nearby sentry tower. “Ho, the tower! Is the spike cut off from the rest of the army?”

The sentry peered into the roiling mass of battle, and then shouted down, “Aye, sir. The spike is cut off. But Lord Marcus’ reserve is moving in to reinforce them.”

Ardeo bit his lip. Six hundred horsemen would have trouble penetrating the milling masses of enemy that were focusing all their rage on the cut-off spike. There was a very real danger that Marcus’s cavalry thrust would be dragged down and massacred if it lost cohesion, a very real possibility in that quagmire. Surveying the scene once again, Ardeo watched the gap form between his two legions and the center legions and their penetrating point. There.

Slowly crouching down and then positioning himself to ride his horse, Ardeo fluttered his cloak out behind him. It would serve as a rallying point while they charged and fought, even though it made it obvious he was a high-ranking target. “Advance at a trot! Wedge formation!”

Moving at a light pace unlikely to tire the horses before they got close enough to unleash a devastating charge, Ardeo’s eyes had more than enough time to regard the scene. The battle had been going on for quite some time, and by all indications, the enemy knew it was doomed. Odacer’s basic strategy had worked, and the last rebel army would break before long. Because of that, it seemed they were concentrating their efforts on the penetrating point, to at least destroy that obstinate Imperial cohort before defeat consumed them.

Hefting his shield as his cavalry drew closer and closer to committing to the fray, Ardeo allowed a smile to cross his lips. Irregular infantry without any sort of cohesion simply had little hope against cavalry. One thousand pounds of horseflesh at the hands of a skilled rider was a vicious weapon on the battlefield, especially going at full speed. Any man unlucky enough to be caught in a horse’s path would end with his back broken, at the very least. Should the number of bodies in the way of the horse grow to the point where it could no longer gallop from sheer mass, war horses had plenty of additional tricks available, from biting into shoulders to kicking heads off necks.

His men were Aimani dragoons, skilled on horse and on foot, as were Marcus’s. Looking across the battlefield, he raised his lance, then lowered it, digging his heels into his horse as he galloped at full speed into the fray, six hundred deadly warriors behind him.


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